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The
International Writers Magazine: Sea Stories
Oceans
Rose
Richard Corwin
The tropic night
air was heavy with humidity that hung like thick motor oil in every
breath. When combined with the stillness and eerie darkness, it
gave the river a mood as if it were the end of the world. With sails
furled, we had been motoring for hours through an endless blackness
without running lights, horizon, stars or moon, giving the illusion
there was no up or down; forward or backward. |
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One of the two Chinese
crewmen on the bow was sweeping the water ahead with a flashlight looking
for obstructions but the darkness absorbed the light as if shining into
an empty, bottomless well. The atmosphere was very tense despite assurances
from Terry and Grif that everything was fine. Then in the distance flickering
lights, shimmering in long streaks over the ebony, calm waters split the
gloom and a welcomed sense of balance between feelings of uncertainty
and confidence came over me. Although the uncertainty remained, much of
it disappeared with the sight of the far-away lights.
We had been at sea for almost three weeks and, as if trying to make a
deadline, stopped only on some small Island in the Philippines for provisions.
My work was standing limited watches when the weather was fair; giving
everyone else a break. Finally after reaching some nameless river on the
Southern coast of China, in the late afternoon, we were making our way
slowly into one of the many obscure branches that seemed to crisscross
the river. It was easy to understand why Terry and Grif had only Chinese
crewmen for this trip. The two apparently knew where we were; taking control
of the Black Rose once we got into the rivers.
When we neared the flickering lights it became clear they were from torches
in the water meant to light the way, along the rivers channel, into
a very small and otherwise unlit port. The first light was a small, crudely
made, candle-lit, bright red lantern of paper and bamboo, hanging from
a pole. As we passed Terry snagged it with a boat hook and quickly extinguished
it. "The red lantern lets us know the torches need to be on the port
or left side as we go into the narrow channel so we dont run aground,"
Terry explained with a whisper. "If it was green wed have to
keep them on our right side."
Not knowing how to respond or what to say, except to shake my head as
though I understood, there were no further explanations for the secrecy
and no reason for me to ask. It was completely unexpected there would
be this much mystery when leaving Honolulu. Now it was too late to do
anything except for me to remain intensely on guard while being cautiously
excited.
Grif went below and returned quickly with a couple of well oiled shotguns
he said were for self defense, just in case there was trouble. Terry stopped
the engine as a narrow dock emerged from the dark. Looking at the whole
scene in the oppressive darkness seemed almost bizarre of two silhouettes
of our Chinese crewmen, holding dock lines ready to throw them; several
motionless figures standing on the low, wooden pier; as we drifted slowly
and silently up to the dock and the stillness underscored everything.
The lines were thrown to the silent men who quickly tied them, fore and
aft, to pilings; securing us tightly against the fragile structure. Two
figures dressed in white suddenly appeared, like ghosts from the shadows,
jumped aboard without a word; quickly descending through the open hatch
with Grif close behind.
"Stay up here and keep watch," Terry told me tossing me one
of the shotguns, "this shouldnt take too long then well
be on our way. See anybody you havent seen before, stop them."
Then he, too, went below decks shutting the hatch-way behind him.
I was in the middle of some really strange, unexpected business, filled
with mystery. Not knowing this before leaving, would probably have made
no difference in my decision to make the trip; just let me be better prepared.
It was my first long sailing trip and my enthusiasm wasnt spoiled
by these curious events and it was an intriguing adventure with the potential
for real trouble.
Alone on the deck, and a long way from home with a shotgun cradled in
my arms with nothing to do but pace back and forth in the dark, gave me
time to think aimlessly. As a teenager, I had an uncontrollable urge for
changes, guarded anticipations, subdued fear and a thirst for worldly
knowledge; the results of being raised in a military family. This gave
me many challenging experiences but this one on the Black Rose was proving
to be way beyond any of my expectations.
Looking at the sails, now loosely furled between the main boom and gaff
now resting in the gallows where they were cradled, it made me openly
laugh when thinking back to my first taste of sailing in the backwaters
of the Chesapeake Bay. Finding a small, sodden rowboat in the swamp grass,
awash in a shallow creek near where fishing for crabs was my pastime,
I salvaged a waterlogged, mud filled boat, dried it out and patched the
holes. A make-shift sail was then made from a boat cover and a mast from
a piece of a two by four from which was hung the clumsy sail. Proudly
launched, it became my first sail boat and the boat cover performed remarkably
well. However, sailing a row boat was not without its drawbacks.
Once reaching the windward end of the cove it was necessary to turn the
boat around, drop the sail and row back. Some days the wind would shift
making for a longer voyage but it also made for a longer row back to shore.
Looking up at the tall empty masts of the Black Rose and remembering that
primitive sail boat; the smell of its moldy wood and swamp mud,
brought back fond memories that seemed like yesterday. While standing
watch on the Black Rose, during the trip and seeing her full sails and
feeling her roll and pitch in the sometimes stormy Pacific, caused me
to also remember my favorite high school art project; a painting of a
Spanish treasure ship.
I had devoted almost an entire semester to carefully working on the fine
details of the ships complex rigging; applying mixtures of various
shades of blue to create an angry, boiling ocean, topped with wind-swept
white caps; all suggesting an approaching squall. Towers of sails were
carefully highlighted to give the billowing canvas distinction against
a background of rain filled, ominous dark clouds. It seemed as if the
sails would split at any moment as the ship sailed full force into the
storm driven seas. While applying more paint, I was swept away into a
daydream of a sailors life; almost tasting the salt air, feeling
its sting on my face and hearing men loudly yell orders above the high
pitch of wind and sea.
Then, during a semester break, my painting disappeared. It was an insult
that someone would take it without knowing the painting; of treasures
and secrets hidden deep in her hold or see the sailors who were rushing
aloft and on deck preparing for the approaching storm. Nor would they
ever explore the exotic islands or make new, exhilarating discoveries
I painted into that ship. My painting was gone but not my imagination
or enthusiasm for sailing.
When the Black Rose came into my life so would more paintings of ships.
My first sail boat and treasure ship painting, however, was never far
from memory.
Suddenly a strange clatter from the dock startled me. Jumping with quick
reflexes, my heart pounding with fear, the shotgun was shaking in my hand
ready to nervously shoot anything or anyone unrecognized that moved on
deck. Everything had little more than formless, unrecognizable shapes
in the darkness. I cautiously approached the place where the noise came
from then made out the dim outlines of some men in the shadows along the
shoreline. The noise had come from unloading their truck. It took a while
for me to calm down enough to relax again. Alone in the darkness with
only a dim glow on the deck from the covered port holes, that guided me
back to the deck house, made the gloom seem more perilous. The men unloading
the truck were softly chattering and laughing. It made me nervous not
able to understand what they were saying.
Finally, after what seemed like hours, they finished unloading what looked
like heavy rope and diving gear. My first thought was it was strange that
we would sail all this way to go diving at night. The puzzle was put as
far away in my mind as possible; it was far too tiring to mull over, or
try to figure out, the nights strange events. It was exciting to
be here despite my nervousness and all the secrecy. My heart finally normalized
to a dull beat and relaxed. Wed be gone soon.
Terry and Grif, although older, were not particularly good friends but
they were two guys who taught me a lot about sailing while in Honolulu.
It was a great birthday gift when they allowed me to accompany them on
this trip. To be finally called a sailor made me begin to feel a real
fraternal spark of achievement. In the dark, the familiar aroma of varnish
and new paint; of new and musty wood, brought back a flood of memories
of time spent, visiting marinas along the Chesapeake, looking for ideas
on how my simply rigged row boat could be improved. Then it sank one day
when its two by four mast plunged, like a spear, through a rotten
board in its bottom.
In Hawaii, my spare time from school was exploring some of the many marinas
that spot the island. It was at the Keehi Harbor where one particular
yacht became the focus of my attention and curiosity. The Black Rose was
an impressive eighty-five foot, two masted, gaff rigged schooner from
California. She was tied up with her port side against a concrete and
wood dock. Her black painted hull, tall varnished masts, neatly furled
sails and many belayed lines created an indefinable excitement that reached
deep within me; stirring memories of my stolen painting.
After discovering the Black Rose my free time was spent at the marina
to stand and stare at her as time allowed. Her decks were always clean
and uncluttered with curtains drawn over the deck house port holes. Always
taking a pad and pencil to sketch her from several angles, I would later
spend many hours improving my drawings. While standing on the dock sketching,
it seemed odd not to see anyone leave or go aboard. The ship and marina
seemed unusually quiet, lonely and, at times, deserted.
Then one day, daring to cautiously approach the seemingly empty schooner
until near enough to step onto her decks, there was conversation coming
from below that caught my attention. Pacing back and forth on the dock,
scraping my feet loudly against the concrete hoping to be noticed, I was
disappointed when no one appeared. Oh well, maybe next time.
Returning another day to the marina, the Black Rose was gone. For several
weeks, languishing in despair and searching for a diversion that would
take my mind away from my deeply personal loss, time after school and
week-ends was spent on a summer league bowling team and working on sketches
and paintings.
It was a month of boring, mediocre, uninspiring summer bowling league
games, before venturing beyond the base again and to the marina where
the Black Rose was berthed. There she was. Just as beautiful as before
she left and on deck one of the men in cut-offs. This time, though, he
unexpectedly smiled and waved.
"Come aboard," he said in a friendly way, "Ive seen
you hanging around before. You some kind of artist, or what?"
"No, not really. I just like sail boats and hope to own one some
day."
"Well come on and Ill show you around. We just got back from
a business trip to China and were trying to get the Rose cleaned
up before our next trip. Shes a real mess."
Looking around it seemed to me that nothing was out of place; she was
a beautiful, neat and tidy schooner with a few odd lines lying around.
Two Chinese crewmen were busy coiling lines and hanging them neatly from
the pin rails.
"Im Richard," I said. "My dads stationed at
Schofield.
"And Im Terry. Glad to meet you Richard. Let me see your sketch
pad, if you dont mind."
Handing him my sketch pad filled with pencil drawings of the Black Rose;
some traced with ink lines to give some dimension to the drawings, Terry
slowly leafed through the pages making approving nods.
"Youre pretty good," he said handing back my book. "Do
you sell them?"
"No I do it for fun and never thought about selling them."
"Tell you what," he said as he reached in his front pocket and
pulled out several twenty dollar bills, "Ill give you twenty
bucks for the one on the fourth page."
That was one of my favorites because it depicted the Black Rose under
sail at sea. Agreeing to the twenty bucks we exchanged money and drawing.
Lost in my excitement and trailing behind Terry from stateroom to galley
to engine room we went below, all the time talking about sailing. The
focslquarters in the front of the ship where the two
crewmen had their bunks were tidy as on deck where they were working.
Following him back up on deck, he pointed out the lines. Halyards for
raising the sails, shrouds that supported the masts, lines to trim the
sails and he pointed to the pin rails where all the ships lines
were fastened to belaying pins. My joy was hard to conceal. My welcome
had run its coarse, though when his partner showed up and Terry
saw me off the ship.
"Glad you could come aboard," he said as he patted me on the
shoulder while gently urging me to the gangway. "Come down and see
me again."
"Thanks," I said, "for letting me look around." He
and the other man went below out of sight.
Those first meetings made me feel there was an air of mystery surrounding
Terry and the Black Rose. More so when seeing the Black Rose hauled out
at a nearby ship yard. It was discovering her total shape and bulk; her
construction that she could provoke a profound sense of nervous adventure
and how important it was for me to have more than a dreamers attachment
to this bold fraternity of sailors.
Her masts were unmistakable and easily seen above the other boats. Hoping
to see Terry again to talk more about life aboard a sail boat and deep
water sailing; this trip to the yard was disappointing when he was no
where to be seen.
Surprisingly it was how much larger than her eighty-five feet the Rose
looked once hauled out of the water. After walking around the large whale
like hull for several minutes, staring up at the recently scraped bottom,
the view gave me a new appreciation of a ships design. Very noticeable
on the keel was an unusual place where it appeared as though a piece several
feet long had been damaged and repaired. Seemed peculiar to me that such
a repair would be made with what looked like lead. While bending down
to inspect a small unusual spot of bright yellow, which caught my attention
under the reddish paint, a strange voice startled me.
"Hey, you." It was the other guy with the faded Hawaiian shirt
and cut-offs. "Whatre you doin?" he bellowed.
"Just looking at your boat," I turned and replied nervously.
"Terry invited me down to visit again and I was
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"So youre the kid that was here a few weeks ago?" he interrupted
sounding almost apologetic. "Well Terry aint on board so you
better get away from here before somethin happens and you get hurt.
Youre some artist," he said as he grabbed me by the arm and
steered me away from the boat. "Terry got your picture framed and
hung in the galley. Its really nice."
"Hey Grif, whats goin on? Terrys voice was loud
but firm. "Thats Richard. Remember I asked him to come down
to visit?"
Grif let go of my arm and apologized. The three of us climbed a ladder
and went below. Sitting motionless and listening in awe for hours, as
they described some of their trips to the Orient and around the islands,
the world seemed a lot smaller.
A few days later the Black Roses hull and bottom were painted and
she returned to the dock. For the time being the odd repair and paint
on the keel was forgotten. She left shortly afterward and was gone for
more than a month. This time, though, forgetting ten pins, concentrating
on school and my paintings with confidence she would return soon, time
passed quickly.
As weeks turned into months, visiting Grif and Terry when they were in
town, my ship-board sailing lessons continued and developed. As time passed,
deep water was the missing factor for me to become a real sailor. One
day, following a trip to California, the Rose was hauled out again to
be readied for another trip. The three of us were sitting at the outdoor
marina bar celebrating my eighteenth birthday; me with a coke, when they
suggested they would take me on their upcoming trip to China. Parental
permission was granted and my first ever ocean voyage became a certainty.
My excitement was unparalleled.
Again a loud noise came from somewhere on shore as more equipment was
unloaded and dragged to the dock. Standing up with a little less fright
than before, all my thoughts about the past quickly evaporated, when the
activity around the ship became frantic as the two men with Terry and
Grif reappeared on deck. Several men on the dock, who were dressed in
diving gear, slipped like fat shiny eels into the water as others dropped
block and tackle into the water behind them followed by loud banging on
the outside of the ships hull. It wasnt long until the banging
ceased; divers returned to the dock, removed their gear and assisted the
other men heave on ropes attached to something quite heavy submerged in
the river.
Before seeing what it was they were hauling up, Terry started the engines,
the crewmen untied the ships lines, the Black Rose was turned around
and headed back to the river. Watching off the stern of the ship, as the
men continued their struggle, they seemed to be fastening the lines to
what looked like the silhouettes of horses. Then all was consumed in darkness;
only a few remaining torches guided us out of the channel and into the
main river not far from the ocean.
Knowing not to ask questions, enjoying the long sail home though, the
events were being silently tossed over in my mind about what had just
happened. My thoughts raced way beyond the boundaries of reason or rationale.
That was my state of mind for the trip back to Honolulu. Even with a number
of storms plaguing us for several days, thoughts never ceased to poll
my imagination for answers. Despite all my snooping there was not a clue
of what happened that night on the river. There were no explanations given
therefore no reason to be dissatisfied with an answer. Surviving the experience,
the trip home was shortened by my occupation with the mystery.
Everyone, including me, was happy to see me safely home. Not mentioning
the mysterious trip seemed best. Telling them of the wonderful time stopping
at several small islands in the Philippines and the great trip home kept
them entertained. Terry and Grif hauled the Black Rose out again for what
they called routine maintenance and repairs. Stopping at the yard, where
the ship was out of the water, and seeing the empty hole in her keel gave
her an odd appearance making the bottom look incomplete. Lying on the
ground was a large, rusty iron ingot that seemed to be about the same
size as the missing piece with two large holes in both ends. Terry and
Grif were arguing inside the ship, giving me time to study the strange
shaped piece. It had holes large enough for two huge bolts lying nearby.
The iron bar seemed to be made to fit into the opening. When bolted into
the keel it would look like the earlier repairs. The iron block was, by
my quick estimation, to be almost six feet long, twelve inches high and
as thick. It was then my decision was to leave quickly before they saw
me there. My affair with the Black Rose had to end before it became too
complicated and dangerous. One day, while standing on the beach, not long
after getting my courage to end the friendship, the Black Rose appeared
under sail on the horizon and slowly faded away in the distance as the
weather clouded over and a cool wind rose out of the west.
Time quickly passed and my life traveled many roads; most full of audacious
adventures; many at a high personal cost, none with regrets. It was after
living in St. Thomas for a number of years, that realizing my lifes
dream of owning a sail boat had become a reality. It was a fine, sleek,
Oregon built fifty foot yawl.
One day, in the marina at Yacht Haven, every ones attention was drawn
to a black hulled ketch being towed into the harbor. Her hull shape looked
vaguely familiar. The similarity to another ship in my past made me look
more closely. Looking her over, once she was docked, revealed it was,
in fact, the remains of the schooner Black Rose hidden under years of
neglect and alterations, now named the Black Swan,. The hull was a faded,
dull black with rust stains covering her like spider webs; old sails hung
limply and lay in dirty laundry like heaps of stained canvas. Faded decks
badly needing caulking looked like bleached bones of some large skeleton.
The schooner that had sailed from Honolulu was no longer the mysterious,
sleek, beautiful ship that sailed to China. The Black Rose was reminiscent
of my first painting in high school; both disappeared and like that painting,
the owners would never feel her passion, feel the same wind or taste the
same salt air of adventure with Terry and Grif. The Black Rose was now
a battered ghost of her former glory.
Benny, the new owner of the schooners remains, talked proudly about
her over a cold beer with me sharing my exciting and youthful experiences
with the Black Rose. Then he revealed more of her recent history. He was
told by a Coast Guard friend the Rose was captured off the West coast
of Panama under suspicion of smuggling gold from California to China.
The authorities were unable to find any gold, after a thorough search
of the schooner, or prove their suspicions, so the two men, assumed to
be Terry and Grif, were released. The two men reportedly returned to Honolulu
and sold the ship to a new group of smugglers who were captured by the
Mexican navy near the coastal town of Manzanillo with a cargo of heroin
hidden in the ships secret compartments. The Black Rose was given
to the U.S. Coastal Geological Survey agency that promptly renovated the
schooner into its present unfamiliar ketch rig and renamed the Black Swan.
She was replaced a few years later with a newer ship, put in a Miami government
dock and put up for auction along with many other, newer, confiscated
boats. Thats when Benny saw her. With a few, low, disinterested
bids, he succeeded in purchasing what seemed to everyone else as a dying
ship. Like a true sailor, he did see beyond the neglect and into her strengths.
Benny towed the Black Swan to St. Thomas and hired a crew of workers to
make her ready for charter. Although he could not afford to return her
to the glorious schooner she once was, he did manage to restore her dignity,
beauty and sleek lines despite the Governments faulty make over. The Black
Swan and Benny became a charter success story. Unlike my personal losses
of ships over the years, the Black Rose returned, with many changes and
a new owner. If a ship could ever seem grateful, the Black Swan responded
to Benny as only a ship with gratitude for a new life and dignity could;
dependable and seaworthy.
With his chartering successes Benny took a year off and sailed on a trans-Atlantic
crossing producing a slightly profitable movie of that experience before
returning to St. Thomas. We became pretty good friends, after he returned,
tirelessly talking for hours about the ship and our experiences with her.
I sailed back to the States, aboard another schooner, and never returned
to the islands. A few years later friends in Fort Lauderdale told
me that Benny had sailed to Martinique to pick up a charter party and
for some reason decided to anchor in the harbor instead of the yacht basin.
When the charter party and the ships crew showed up at the docks
the Black Swan was gone; nowhere to be seen in the harbor. The crew expressed
concern over the yachts disappearance and in spite of days and hundreds
of square miles of Coast Guard searching; Benny and the Black Swan were
never found. Her whereabouts had remained a mystery for almost two decadessome
claimed to have seen her sailing around the Bahamas Islands and as far
away as Hawaii.
While searching in a yacht harbor in Titusville, Florida for friends,
who sailed their boat Westwake up from Fort Lauderdale, I spotted in a
dry-dock cradle behind the maintenance building, the weed covered remains
of a familiar graceful schooner. Now bare of masts and rigging the Black
Rose had finally reached an irreversible, humble and humiliating end.
In shock and disbelief I walked through the weeds to stand under her whale-like
rust-colored hull, now pocked with dead barnacles, and found the tell-tale
scab in her keel. Whatever had been bolted there had been removed.
The dock master didnt know Benny or who owned the now derelict boat
although each month a check was received to pay her dockage along with
a note that stated instructions will be provided as to when she was to
be burned and her ashes returned to Honolulu. Instructions will follow.
© Richard Corwin November 2007
chapalaricardo@yahoo.com
Willaimsburg, Va.
Richard has also completed his first collection of short stories entitled
Midnight Gates.
"Midnight Gates," was given the "Best Books Award Finalist in the category
of Fiction & Literature: Short Stories,
The book can be seen at www.MidnightGates.com.
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