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Summer
On Cadillac (Part 7)
Mike Blake
I
did report to work later that day, and Kevin was all smiles, wanting
to know how my night had gone. I filled him in on some of the
details and he shook his head and laughed.
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So youre
hanging with Frankie Doyle and his crowd, huh? he said.
Yeah, well, theres more to Frankie than I thought. And Im
definitely gonna visit the frat house again.
A house full of college girls, Kevin said. That sounds
very interesting.
If we can ever swing a day off together, well go over there.
Hell, we could go over after work some night. It doesnt
sound like they go to bed early. He laughed.
Not if last night was any indication.
Frank Doyle came in the store later that afternoon.
Youre one dedicated man, he said, looking sleepy-eyed
and pouring a cup of coffee.
Just roll out of bed, Frank? Kevin asked, smiling. He looked
at a couple of regulars who sat at a table by the big front windows,
and they grinned and shook their heads, expressions that said: oh, to
be young and foolish again.
No, hell
Frank said, going along with it. I
just got finished with my daily five-mile run, and just stopped to see
how my favorite Thriftway team was doing.
Five miles, huh Frank? one of the rough looking regulars
said. That must have been some dream.
The other coffee drinker laughed, as did Hemming.
Gonna buy some of that special protein drink youre
fond of, Frank? Hemming asked, nodding at the beer cooler.
Sure, Frank said. I have to replace all the
fluids I sweated out.
Thats right, Frank, one of the regulars said. Dont
let yourself get too dehydrated.
Yeah, thats a mistake when youve been exercising like
that, the other agreed.
Nothing a few twelve-ounce curls wont fix, right Frank?
I threw in.
Damn, nothing like feeling right at home at Thriftway, Frank
said, grinning. Thats what I come and see my friends for.
We dont mind, Frank, as long as you pay for the coffee,
Kevin said, looking at the regulars again. A couple of them had commented
on the fact that Doyle sometimes slipped out of the store without paying.
Frank looked at me and opened his mouth to say something, but before
he did, I told him it was seventy-five cents for the cup (which included
one free refill). Frank muttered something to himself, but fished the
change out of his pocket.
I dont want to cheat Thriftway of their seventy-five cents,
he said. I only spend half my money in this place.I told
him, in a lowered voice, that I would explain later.
Hey, if Id known you were sleeping out in the woods, I would
have let you stay in my room, he said. Theres plenty
of room on the floor. Its a mess, but hell, its indoors.
Theres running water and a shower.
I was a little disappointed that Doyle remembered what Hailey had said
about my camp the night before, for I expected this offer from him;
he was that kind of guy, and he meant well. Yet, I had grown attached
to my campsite, and though I had enjoyed my one night at the frat house,
I couldnt say that I wanted to live there. I liked what little
solitude I had these days, and most of that came in my wooded spot.
Yet Doyle, a very social animal, wouldnt understand that.
I already offered him a place on my couch, Kevin said. But
the Nature Boy there said no.
How in the hell did you ever find that place? Frank asked.
I looked around to see if any of the coffee regulars were listening,
but they had gone back to their talk.
Just by chance, I said. To be honest with you, I never
expected to find that good of a place that close to town. I thought
Id have to hike a couple miles further, at least.
It is pretty convenient, Hemming admitted. Id
get myself a hammock if I was up there, though.
I thought about it, I said. I just dont know
where to get one around here.
Doyle mentioned a sporting good store, but I shook my head no to that.
Too expensive this time of year.
You want to go to Barton for that, Kevin said. Ill
drive you over one of these mornings.
Yeah, plenty of it, Kevin said, chuckling.
Youd be close to Hailey, Frank said, winking.
That point had me thinking, and Doyle saw it and laughed.
Thats right, he said. I thought I saw a man
in love last night. He grinned at Kevin, who had a big smile on
his face too.
That must have been some swim, Kevin said, and the two of
them laughed. I couldnt keep the smile off my face.
It had been an enjoyable dip, and on any other night it might have lasted
longer. It was her eyes that I thought about, and her sense of adventure.
Hailey definitely seemed like someone you could have fun with. And that
seemed to be the case with Donna and Leanne too.
I thought it might be interesting for a group of us to get in a car
and get out of Jordan Harbor for a day, go find a place on the island
to have a picnic, go hiking, swimming. Yes, one fun day like that would
really make the summer for me. It was something to think about as I
carried out the business transactions.
Haileys hot, I heard Doyle say, though I wasnt
really listening to what he and Hemming said to each other. Nor was
I listening to the caffeine driven chatter of the coffee drinkers, as
I sometimes did. I smiled and greeted the customers, but a part of me
was away from the store altogether, thinking about some of my favorite
places on the island, places where I had stood, rapt, at the sight of
nature itself, with people and their activities temporarily out of the
picture. Yes, there were stunning sights all over this rocky island
that had attracted people here in the first place, and it had nothing
to do with this commercial exchange I was part of here in town. The
business of the town seemed cheap and new, clinging like a barnacle
patch to the old and formidable rock of the island. There was nothing
lasting in it; it wasnt meant to, being seasonal in the first
place, and business, for the most part, run by people who didnt
even live here year round. Only a certain hardy few invested all of
their time and energy into this place, like some of the clam diggers,
fishermen, and handymen who came in for their coffee, gruff and tough
old birds who still did what their daddies had done before them, and
werent finding it easy by any means. Even they were clinging in
their own way to a way of life that was almost extinct these days, at
least commercially.
Hot little Hailey, I thought, smiling to myself. It sounded like the
name of a poem I would have to write before the summer was out.
You gonna come over after work? Frank asked.
I shrugged and grinned.
Ill see how Im feeling, I said.
He shrugged.
I guess youll feel like having a few beers, wont you?
Probably. But I dont drink every night.
Frank looked at me as if he doubted that.
Not all of us are fulltime lushes like you, Frank, Kevin
said.
Man, you guys are hard, Frank said, though he really wasnt
stung by the statement. In fact, the image of You have to cut
him a little slack, Kevin, I said. It isnt easy living
in the party house. A man has to keep Doyle knew we were kidding
and probably would have flipped us the bird if there werent any
customers in the store.
Hes the head stud over there, huh? Kevin said, in
one of his better moods this day.
Hell, you might as well call it a stable, I said, my voice
lowered. Kevin really laughed at that, and Frank scoffed at my words,
though the grin never left his face.
He cant afford to, Kevin said. The summers
half over.
© Mike Blake
Feb 2006
mablake63@cox.net
Summer
in Cadillac
Mike Blake - a novella in progress
a summer on the island
Summer in Cadillac - Chapter
Two
Shiftwork 11.05.05
Summer in Cadillac - Chapter
Three
Taking a Break in a pig's sty
Summer in Cadillac - Chapter
Four
Beer and Girls
Summer in Cadillac - Chapter Five
Getting Stoned
Summer in Cadillac - Chapter
Six
The secret pool 9.01.06
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